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Ok...so this is a submission for drewthefan123 's ( [link] ) contest. This is just the first reff pic of him, but more is to come:) hope u like it ;) was drawn 12 o' clock at night and it took me 50 minutes I guess :D lol please, do critique as much as u like...or more :) OKEEEEEEEEY! so heres the complete ref for this guy :D if u are wondering about ANYTHING about Shiroku, just leave a comment :D kk? yeah ....YouGoDoThat :D

Profile for: Shiroku

Gender: Male
Race: Pheryxian (this is a race from a comic I’m working on with Mapleshaddow)
Age: 29
Birthdate: sixth of Mars
Astrological Sign:
Chinese Zodiac Sign: horse
Blood Type: Pheryxian males blood is metallic light green and the females blodd is blue.
Height: 1,82 m
Beliefs/Religion: Pheryxians worship the Goddes of hunting, and the God of water and war, but Shirkou doesn’t believe in ANY supernatural things or gods in any shapes.
Hobby: traning/ practising martial arts, swordsmanship and the art of teleportation.
Abilities: Shiroku has the ability to teleport 30 feet. For each feet he teleports he’s got to wait o.1 second befoure he can do it again.

>family background/ History/:
The Pheryxians community is controlled by rivaling clans. This system often leads to warr and might seam very brute, but it works. (A Pheryxian clans quantity of members can varry alot. (between 500-5000 (only the largest clans.))) There is much disagrement between the clans, but when it comes to warr they pritty much agree that there must not be any hessitation with crushing the enemies into dust. Becouse their community is controlled by warr, the Pheryxians have become experts with fighting tactics, and there probably isn’t one Pheryxian who doesn’t know how do handle a blade. The pheryxians can easily hold back any attacks from the outside world, but they are far to bussy fighting each other to attack any other nations.
Shirokus family had an entirely normal status as members in their clan until Shiroku turned 13 when he killed a member from the main clan in their land without permission from his own clan. Shiroku was supposed to be punnished for this, but when the clan realised the man Shiroku killed was one of the 4 vise captains in the rivalising clan, the leader of his clan decided so promote Shirokus family and take advantage of Shirokus powers, and use them to rule their nation.
When Shirokus parrents found this out they tried to stand up against their own clan. The clans leader realized that they might make much trouble for im so he decided to kill them. Sadly Shirokus parrents didnt stand a chance and they both were killed and burned while Shiroku was on a training mission. When Shiroku returned to his village he saw his parrants still burning, and hanged in the centre of the village statuated as an example to anyone who was even thinking about betraying the clan.
Shiroku went into a state of rage and savagely killed anything he came across with eas, but then the bodyuards of the clan chief/leader stepped in and stopped him. Shiroku killed many of these guards, but they were many and majorely trained in the art of swordsmanship and in the end they captured Shiroku, put in in custody, and then sentenced to death becouse of all the people he had killed. For a long time Shirokus exetution day was put on hold becouse, the clan still thought they could take advantage of him.
One day, at dawn, there was a laud sound of cannons fireing outside Shirokus jail. Shiroku woke up and saw his inmate was allready awake. “whats going on?” Shiroku asked. The inmate was staring out the window sealed with a magical invisble barrier. “Its “the Avengers”...” He looked as if had just got his death sentence himself (Shirokus inmate). Shiroku had heard of this clan. It was not from his own land, and was not made out of Pheryxians, but eleven random; insanely strong people who hade been know for searching their redemption. Hence the name: “The Avnegers”.
Shiroku heard another great sound, as if something big was destroyed by something even bigger. Shiroku turned to one of the guards in the prison. “How many are they” Shiroku asked. He was getting more frightned by the second. All the time he heard the screams of men, women, children and the sounds of big things landing on houses and the ground. The guard turned around towards Shiroku. “Three...”
Suddenly the the screans stopped. There was absolute silence. Then; another sound, but this time it was so close that Shiroku could see what made it. It was the wall of the prison who was blown into a million of pieces. There stood three men in the dust woch arose when the wall was destroyed. Shiroku was as frightened as ever. Befoure Shiroku actually saw what had happened he smelled the odour of blood. Then he saw out between the three men. There was only destruction and death in sight. How could these mere men have crushed the entire village on their own. Even the 20 feet tall city wall was shattered.
The three men came closer to Shirokus cell. The guard bravely stepped in their way, and the three men stopped. One of them looked on the other too for some kind of answer to a cilent question. One of the other two nodded. Then the first person barly lifted his hand, as the guard went down on his knees, spitting blood, then he started screaming in pain, contracting his muscles like a fish on land. As the guard turned his face against Shiroku, Shiroku saw that the person who had guarded him for the last 2 months was the Clans leader. Now Shiroku actually pittied him as he allmost could feel his painhimself. The clan leader was writhing in pain as if a thousand blunt, burning needles was being slowly showwed into him. “What is wrong with you!?” Shiroku shouted to the three men. “What’s the reason for this bloodshed?” It took a while, but eventually one of the men asnwered. “Two wrongs makes one right. Now does i not?”
After that Shiroku had nowhere to go, but even if he did he wouldn’t have a choice. He was captured by the Three men and taken back to their secret hideout where the eight other members abviusly was waitng for the others who had attacked his city. Later, when Shiroku got to know the other members of the clan he actually understood them. He didn’t hate them as everyone else did. He evem became friends with them and started to share opinions with them. Today Shiroku have joined “The Avengers” and he is even one of the most powerfull members.
>Birthplace:
Land: Land of the swamps.
City: Rimwald. (Capital in Land Of The Swamps)

>home: Shiroku doesn’t have a real home, he only lives with the clan a few nights in the month to plan, chat, and train with his “friends” ...hehe well u think “ fellow members” sound so much better then? Hehe :D
>;possesions, make-up, jewelry, etc. :
His clothes, his twin blades, called Dardaros and Serpedon. Shirokus blades helps him to quicker absorb energy and transform it to himself. Shiroku can also give some of his own energy to the blades to make them more powerful. The blades sucks the energy out of everything they touch except Shiroku. (As mentioned it works the oppsite way with Shiroku.) I will not explain too much of this, cause it will be one of mu surprises if I make it to the second round of the competition ;) hehe... AND FINALLY! HIS BELT wich have the incredible power of keeping his pants from falling off :D Haha ;P
>;pets: Shirokus only pet is a morph whom he found in the nature abbondoned by its famile, couse of its lack of tallent. The morpher is called Puddin. (this pet will probably not join Shiroku in the contest tho ;P)
>body: since Shiroku is a Pheryxian, he’s got an incredible strength, agility and speed. Additionally Shiroku was one of his lands best fighter, and that only as a kid.
>marks,scar,tattoo: Shirokus boddy is full of scars and marks who he’s gained throughout the time he spent as a member of “The Avengers”. (of course, as a normal person, he gained some as a kid too). His clan haven’t brought the scarrs upon Shiroku themselves, but he’s gained them through the missions he’s done for the clan and for himself aswell. Shiroku has also got a tattoo, wich symbolises that he’s a member of “The Avengers”.

>clothing: Shirokus pants have got an inner layer who’s made entirely of agile steel. He’s got a pair of gloves that has got the same layer of steel as his cargo pants, but they got more powers too. Through a storry I’m not gonna post on DA ( at least not yet) Shiroku has gained a power/ flaw that transformes his armes into something deomon-like wich grants him more power but also is very painfull and makes him loose his mind. The gloves stopps this from happening to him, due to the fact that it usually only gets in the way for him. This doesn’t count as clothing, but he’s allways chewing on a piece of grain....just for fun ^^

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Personality: Thinks everything very well through, and he’s got an amazing will-power. Often depressed and dont speak much when he’s with other people. But when it comes to battle, he goes real crazy and get reaky bloodthirsty. Shiroku allways “scanns” his enemy befoure a battle, and he’s a master of understanding how people and animals think and how the body works. Shiroku can allmost read a persons mind through watching the persons stance, body, facial expression and so on. He can do the same thing with peoples physical condition.
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>likes: training, weapons and the feeling of being the better/ stronger person in fights. Shiroku is searching for the meaning of life, but has got a little problem with axcepting that there is none.
>dislikes: people, espesially cowards and people who cannot defend themselves. Shiroku hates loosing, allthough this is something he has allmost never done. Shiroku has never lost after he turned 15 as an exception to some of the members of his clan.
>fears: Due to the fact that Shiroku sees no meaning in life, now that his parrents are dead and the ones he wanted to kill is dead, Shirokue fears nothing. But still he’s got something in his brain that tells him “dont loose”. Of course this is a part of the instinct, but there is something more. Something Shiroku hasn’t found out of yet.

>goals: Shiroku has got no goal but to be the best in the entire world, but he’s allmost given up on this, due to the strength of the members of his clan.
>favorite food: Pheryxians dont eat. Instead they draw energy out of the air, hence the air around Shiroku is allways cold since he draws the heat out of it. He also does the same thing to people. But the energy that he draws out of the air is not enough, and therefore Shiroku has to fight so that he can draw energy from his opponents. When Shiroku runs low on energy he has to kill something. He draws energy faster that way.
>least favorite food: Vegetables. Shiroku cannot draw energy out of things that is not or have not been alive.
>most prized possesion (important or emotional value): His swords. Much like the jedies bond to their laser swords...(If u have seen Star Wars, wich I absolutely hope you have)
>vernacular (way of speaking): Shiroku speak in a way as if he was unbeatable and allways was right. But then again...he usually is.
>;psychological condition: Shiroku is a realist wich do not believe in short-cuts when it comes to power and training. He doesn’t believe in faith or any gods or things like that. Hence he believes that if something good is going to come his way, it has to be becouse of his own effort.
>character behaviour: Shiroku allways “scanns” his opponents for flaws and powers befoure a battle and takes advantage of that. Coil is an expert when it comes to the human mind, and he understands it better than anny other person. This is a very important ability he possesses, and it often decides the outcome of the battles he fights.
>social and other pressure, problems: Shiroku has never bond with annyone but his parrents, and now the members of his clan.
>beliefs, superstition, moral value: Shiroku believes that there is no Good nor evil. Only selfishness in different degrees, and that people hav been given different oppertunities and act on the experience they have made throughout their lives. Allmost all people actually act on the basic instinct, survival.
>;positive characteristics: shiroku takes responsibility, and allways got a plan. He’s allways the mind in the team. Since shiroku understands the way of thinking and stuff like that so well, he’s got trouble with socialising if he wants. He’s also very supportive to his few friends.
>negatives characteristics: Shiroku is a loner and in general dont like people. Shiroku is quite selfish and dont show any mercy to ANNYONE outside his team.

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:iconollieboy94:
uhm...the final Shiroku will looke quite much better and a little different. a mojar change I'll make is his pants and gloves are gonna be black or at least dark(er) lol

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Ooh, he looks so manly & cool! I hope to see more of him in Drew's tourney!:D

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yay :D thnx for comment...but sadly I'm not so good at drawing motions, so I'm not to optimistic about this ;( If u see this reply, will you please point out some of the flaws too? :) on forehand; thnx

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Hm.. Well, his overall body structure is pretty well proportioned, his face on the other hand needs a little work. His eyes are sort of lopsided and his mouth is just a tad bit too crooked.:nod:

But his design is great. What sort of abilities does he have? XD


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what do u mean about that with the eyes? and onother thing, is it visable that he's got a grain in his mout...I'll make it more visible if not, but I take the critique, and I also agree...his face is a little off :/ thnx anyways tho :D

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I knew I'd be fighting you. I foresaw it.
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What color is his hair?
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blond and a slight red....well....it's blonde with red and orange stripes :)

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uh...no...scratch that...its only blonde....sorry>.< its okey if u make it as I mentioned earlier (:>

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